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 | Why Poetry  [E] A Poem about why we bother to do the extra work Poetry requires  |
| (4.0)  Welcome to WDC! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you!  I enjoy poetry so I was keen to see another poet's view about why we do it!  I was enchanted by the idea of the dance and magic of it all. Right on! The poem flows quite smoothly with a consistent rhyme that gives is a sing song tone. The first verse flows more naturally than the second, which has more stops in the word combinations. The rhythm is more a free flow as opposed to syllable patterned. I like the idea in the last line that places poetry on a higher plane.  In word choice, I would be careful using non specific adjectives to describe. eg. "lovely" and "gently". I wanted to add but" with "also" to smooth it out. I appreciate the sentiment about poetry. Thanks for sharing your vision about why you like poems.  Keep on musing!Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 02/06/2016 @ 2:21pm EST