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*Balloonp* Welcome to WDC svaldez! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! *Delight*


Wow! I was drawn to the concept in the title--a "smashed flower". The unique choice of adjective really evokes a strong image of being hurt. I see someone stamping on a flower.The metaphor for lost love is effective here. *Thumbsup*

The imagery in your free flow poem is vivid. The last two lines present a potent comparison! Good show! I liked the sound combination in those words as well.

I think you do not need the comma after "loneliness" as it is the subject of the line with "dims".*Wink* Put a period after "rainfall" as complete pause.

I enjoyed entering into your vision! We've all been there. Thanks for sharing. *Starstruck*

Light on the path as you write on!
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