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 Between Tigris and Euphrates  [E]
A brief account of our foibles in Iraq
by Prosody
Review by eyestar~*
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Wow! This is fascinating! Even the title has a poetic feel and acts as part of the poem I feel.

The expression, without details, spills the intent and after effects of conflicts in a creative way.
I love the mono rhymes and the short lines are evocative and allow the reader to imagine the details--it could apply to many conflicts and trials between folks. Very clever!*Thumbsup*

The title was pleasant to read aloud. The sound combinations were well chosen. I had to smile as the idea of history being brief! And yet here it is! *Smile*

The punctuation may need a tweak to be consistent. Should there be a connective punctuation after "Gains" like a colon or semi-colon? or a end punctuation after "shame".?

I really enjoyed this brief summation. IT reveals the pain without gory detail and made me feel like it was all for naught in the end. *Starstruck* Thanks for sharing your vision.

Light on the path as you write on!
eyestar
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