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Given: Apr 8, 2016 at 6:41am
Length: 292 Characters |
292 w/o WritingML
You work the words of this prompt into your poem well, without disrupting the flow. I also liked the last two lines. They really nail the poem down. When I read this I felt the frustration and the resignation of the narrator. I'm getting to the age where I will experience the same thing.
You responded to this review 04/08/2016 @ 9:02am EDT
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