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Juxtaposed  [13+]
Remember when you weren't strapped down? Recall those times and listen now.
by A*Monaing*Faith
Review of Juxtaposed  
Review by Past Member 'inkerod'
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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You work the words of this prompt into your poem well, without disrupting the flow. I also liked the last two lines. They really nail the poem down. When I read this I felt the frustration and the resignation of the narrator. I'm getting to the age where I will experience the same thing.
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