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*Wind* Greetings, l.a.p! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp!

Shara's Prompt: Tee-shirts, like bumper stickers, can provide feedback about the owner/wearer’s likes, dislikes, opinions, and causes.
Your task is to write about one person’s observations (on his/her walk in the city park)

~~~ Which tee-shirt was the favorite?
~~~ Which shirt had a cute picture on it?
~~~ Which slogan appalled?
~~~ How does your character view such public declarations?

POEM or STORY


*Reading*Oh. Wow. That's pretty powerful. Plus you followed the prompt really well.

*Wind* Great work.

*Starb* I loved the line:
a passing taxi snaps out a small-caliber backfire.

*Wind* Best of luck in the contest! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Poseyp*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Poseyp*


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