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Review of Weather Nose  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* You sent me some nice reviews yesterday, so here I am perusing your portfolio to read and review today.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think this is about the demise of a relationship that the poet or speaker (could be from another's point of view I guess) didn't want to see end. I have found in life that we romanticize things in the past and maybe what was not so perfect becomes more so in the rear view mirror. I guess that is the cynic in me. Once something was finished I rarely regretted much about it, but that's just me. I'm weird.

It is sad to want to remember something more than we do. So, there is a bit or remorse or regret over not really recalling all that transpired. I see the regret as being more for that than for the relationship itself, but I could be way off there, too.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* This part got to me:

"When it hurts, I cushion the pain with false smiles
to catch what might have been from fading away,
but the absence in your eyes travels many miles,
and I cannot bring back photographs of yesterday."

There is a sadness here, but maybe an acknowledgement that the break was inevitable. I sort of read that into not being able to bring it back by looking at pictures.

This is a heart breaking poem, but I sense the element of moving on is already at work in it.

Very eloquent and fine use of language!


HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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