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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* You visited me with a nice review, yesterday, so here I am perusing your portfolio to read and send you a review!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Well, I had someone like this in my life. She was my niece. She was my version of "wendy" I guess.

It was me cheering for the best for her from afar, but it didn't do any good.

We all want the best for the bright lights in our lives, but it doesn't always work out that way. Mine turned into a tragedy of mamoth proportions that I will never get past.

So, as a walking wounded, I wish somehow I'd been a little more of a support or something anything. But, you can't change what has been only what's ahead of you.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup*This part was the most moving to me:

"The wind, it cried of sadness and
the wind, it filled with sorrow.
Soon we all were there to see that
Wendy would come to be."

You know, with my Wendy, who was Tracy, there was wind the next day - wind and rain. The sun wouldn't dare shine after something so awful.

This is a brilliant, heart breaking poem. I guess I come at it as a support system cog in the wheel who failed miserably.

But, it still says something to me about one of the worst days ever, and about what might have been.


HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 
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