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when you know that you are not normal
by Naziba
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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interesting story, has a feeling of confusion and insanity, which the bold and size matches with perfectly...

highlight:"But I need to know that this has happened before that this is normal, that people often come and go, that people often imagine. It never felt too good to be like me .It never felt too good to catch your boyfriend staring at other girls. It never felt too good to be able to relate to every sad song .It never felt too good to see your mother crying .It never felt too good to be me."
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successes

the second half of it goes berserk and it feels amazing!

captures a feeling of confusion perfectly
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flaws

a bit too, ahem, crazy...
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4.0 stars overall :)

now onto another one! (with this same format ((that I need to change...)))
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