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 Never Forget Me   [E]
A person whose friends left them for better or more popular people represented by flowers
by Alex
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Alex

My name is Mina~ and I'm reviewing for "The Simply Positive Group" . I thought I would give you some feedback on your work. I strive to give honest reviews and I hope you find this review helpful.

*Butterflyb* Initial Impression: This poem is beautiful with your words.
*Idea* Theme and Creativity: This has lovely gratitude poem inside every line. You nicely told the sweet relationship between two friends. The bond between the friends is the only real and purest bond in the world.

*Pencil* Favorite lines : I like the lines
Both of us blowing in the wind
for I have not seen such beauty since
My right much more elegant than I
I knew I would soon have to say goodbye

*Cut* Suggestions: you need to capitalized all the first words of each line.

I enjoyed reading your poem.


These are my thoughts and ideas alone. I hope you found them helpful. Not all of us see writing or any one piece in the same light. Please take what helps you from my comments and ignore the rest. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.



Mina  


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