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 Sleep Pleas  [13+]
Looking for that perfect sleep.
by Don Two
Review of Sleep Pleas  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Photo Taken By My Human June 2009



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

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What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I like the title and the exploration of different things that we try in order to sleep. I think if you are going to do it, it can happen almost anywhere.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* Even though I agree that anywhere will do it, this surprised me:

"Allow me pleasant dreams.
Yet, wouldn’t you know it? The
living room floor works best."

Well, it works best for my dog only if she has a pillow and blanket on top of the floor. This might be a sign of a back problem. In my house if I went to sleep on the floor, my dog would let me know that it was her domain so there isn't any of that going on. Plus, there is dog hair on the floor at times.

Well, to each their own I guess. You did a nice job with the prompt exploring how to spend money to get the night's sleep when the simple solution usually is the best one.

Fine work!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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