highlight:
"He looks a lot like me.
The only real difference
He is smiling"
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notes

1. I can see you don't like sleeping with negative thoughts, but then again, who does?
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successes

impressive subtlety

interesting concept

incredible ending!
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flaws

it feels like it's missing something, just something...

a bit of the middle was overdone/felt like filler...
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overall 4 stars

embrace that!