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 WORLD PEACE  [E]
A Double Ethere type poem has 20 lines with a syllable count 1 to 10 and then 10 to 1
by Don't Care
Review of WORLD PEACE  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*


What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I was looking in my friend ~ Santa Sisco ~ 's contest and saw your item. I would like to moo a very warm welcome to the site to you! *Cow*

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I am always a fan of maintaining a specific syllable count. It is not easy to do this and make sense, but you have done a masterful job of it with your fine offering for my friend's contest.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup*I like the message. This part in particular was moving to me:

"Knowledge, like a serpent's tooth is sharp,
is able to pierce hearts, and started wars.
Let's temper our quills then, for heaven's sake;
and build bridges that lead us from hate."

A little knowledge and prudent wording of it goes a long way, doesn't it?

Again, I welcome you. Since you are new, you might want to check out "The Writer's Cramp"  if you haven't already. It's a daily, prompt driven contest and a great place to meet and read other authors on the site.

Well done with your poetric entry here!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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