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Review #4212290
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 The Sad Clown  [ASR]
One to many times chasing the rabbit down the hole only to have it eat her very soul...
by Screamin' Elephantz
Review of The Sad Clown  
Review by WhatIsSafety
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Wow. Just Wow. Uh 1 thing though, I think this would be more of the 13+ category XD

no highlight, this was amazing...
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a few grammar mistakes but besides that, amazing!
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good but not good enough for a full-on 5 stars ;)
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