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Given: Apr 19, 2016 at 6:25pm
Length: 1,004 Characters |
910 w/o WritingML
HI cinn! While searching for Earth day items to celebrate, I read this item and put it in my template to save as I wanted to say how much I enjoyed the vision. Dandelions are one of my fav spring flowers. I eat them out of my back yard and after the coltsfoot are one of the first flowers to pop up here in spring!
You have captured the essence of this plant in an enchanting way and it was so pleasant and vivid an image that if felt magical! The tone felt appreciative of the the wonder of the golden treasure. I found the word "angles" evocative as well. The comparing to the yellow bird is so right on too. The first line gives us something to ponder and evoked curiosity. Glad I found and read this.
I so appreciate your way with words. Happy Earth Day this week.
Thanks for this tribute to the dandelion! Bees love them too.
Light on the path as you write on!
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