Review number # 5 of week 4/14-4/20

Hi

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Nature's Will

First Impression: I felt like I was captured in the whirlwind with the fragile petals struggling to hold on to themselves with your climatic story.

What I liked: How you introduced the struggle immediately so the reader experienced the exhaustion with them to the end.

What needs your attention: Nothing, the prompt was covered in an smooth flowing freestyle.

Favorite Parts: The suns rays peeking over the evergreens after the fierce storm. The words chosen enhanced the story immensely, sweeping the reader into the eye of the storm with the fragile petals.

Overall Impression: The imagery carried the reader from stanza to stanza leaving her wanting to know if all survived after the volatile storm.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .