I came across this cute story and had to drop by! The title appealed to me and the story was a wonderful surprise. The personification was brilliant and I loved how you kept me guessing right from the start by giving a name and comparing it to a cat. Wonderful deception!

The double twist at the end was well conceived too. I had to laugh!

You engaged my curiosity and I had to keep reading. The images and setting were vivid and the thoughts in the character's head were realistic and helped build the tension. I could so visualize the scenario. The door opening provided relief and yet some excitement too. Well done.

The writing was coherent and flowed well, maintaining the suspense. The last line did not seem like an end and yet brings our attention back to the start and the nausea! LOL Superb!

Thanks for sharing this enthralling entertainment. I had a good time.

You responded to this review 04/20/2016 @ 9:10pm EDT

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