I lust read your gratitude poem about friendship"Silent Scream"
The poem is beautiful with the flow of your words. Your words remind me one of my friend who lived far away. Somehow your word captured what I am feeling for her. I like the lines
How long can you ignore your pain
and excuse your lack of care
How long your feelings locked away
'Till they're no longer there
A wonderful example of heartfelt friendship. I enjoyed reading your poem.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone.Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.
Happy Writing!
Mina
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