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Review #4212595
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 The Waltz  [E]
my favorite poem
by K8McP
Review of The Waltz  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I was looking in my friend, ~ Santa Sisco ~ 's Newbie contest and saw your poem so I thought I would read and send a review! Happy to meet you! *Cow*

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I like the sense of foreboding and foreshadowing that is laced throughout this fine poem. You use words like, "captured", "burning", and "danger" to alert the reader that this stranger may mean trouble in the relationship sense.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup*I like that while she is unsuspecting the reader is more and more aware of what is about to happen. It does not seem like it will be a good thing for her with this last part:

"He strikes quickly.
His eyes glitter as he devours
his helpless victim, a willing sacrifice."

One can only hope that this is a figurative and not a literal disaster that awaits her!

Fine poem!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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