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Hi chris_1241

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Hey Chris. I came across your poem in Noticing Newbies page and decided to give you review on it. I used to have same dreams, about my teeth falling out, so I'm pretty much familiar with that uncomfortable moment when I wake up. I also rush to check out if they are still there. I have read somewhere that this dream can mean something positive and also it has negative meaning. Positive one is that it's time for some kind of changes and growth in your life. Negative meaning is that there will be some huge loss in your life, so I don't know which one of these you can relate to.

I love, love, love this line of your poem, it is so smart:

*Flagp* They speak to me,
but I do not open my mouth.

Like I mentioned above there's a meaning behind this dream and this line talks about it. You don't need to open your mouth to say something, it's all been said by teeth falling out. I just love the whole poem and how you handled it. I would maybe write about it in more creepy way but I love your version, too. Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to WdC. All smiles..*Smile*.

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