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A Walk in the Woods  [13+]
Let nature be your teacher.
by Eric Wharton
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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"SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" 

Hello there, Eric Wharton
This is a Simply Positive Review! *UmbrellaB*


*Gavel* I am also judging your entry for "The Bard's Hall Contest"  Thank you for entering!

*MushroomBr* I thoroughly enjoyed your beautiful walk in the woods, the sights and sounds, all of the imagery that reveals mother nature's rebirth at spring.

Loved this part:

"There is something about spring, with its kinesthesia of renewal that's uplifting, even spiritual."

And ...

"An awareness of the beauty, symmetry, and a carefully executed ballet began to creep into my thoughts."

The choices of words meld within the mind, awakening the imagination. They describe the essence of spring. Lovely! *Recycle*


Observations:

"that we rarely truly see." "rarely see" is sufficient, no need for the adverb "truly," it actually detracts from the impact of the line.


Otherwise well done! *Vine2*

*RainbowR* Great parting words at the end:

"How blessed for us to be part of such a living, breathing entity, an entity that paints on a landscape more sweeping than we can ever imagine, an entity we rarely give a passing thought to."


I agree! *Earth*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch






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