I love the songs of cardinals. I so enjoy them visiting the bird feeders every spring. At the end of the day, one gets in the same tree, calling to the rest of its family. Several cardinals join the lone bird, soon thereafter.

Not only are the males a gorgeous red birds, but also, the females have their own beauty with their buffy-brown tones and luscious reddish tints. Their beaks are a gorgeous red-orange color; so don't forget to give the females of the species their due.


Your poem described the very nature of cardinals and the beauty they bring to an area when they become more apparent in the spring, as mating season begins anew.



Observations:

"Every year with the Cardinals
arrival to a more inviting atmosphere;"

[Cardinals'] plural possessive, their arrival "to a more inviting atmosphere." Or, if it is only one cardinal that returns each year, which I doubt is what you meant, "cardinal's" would be proper grammatical usage.


"To gaze upon his red body
while listening becomes
breathtakingly soothing.
Listening to the Cardinal,"
"Relaxing
listening,"
Repetitious use of the word "Listening." Perhaps replace one it with hearing.

However, describing sounds without using the repeated words would be better in one of these instances.

Example:
A Cardinal's song, such sweet notes defined, reaching the airwaves through my mind.


"As days end
comes to a close;" [day's]

A couple spots could use commas, for better pause in the reading.

Otherwise, well done!

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch





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