"SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" Hello there, Monty This is a Simply Positive Review! I'm also judging your poem for "The Bard's Hall Contest" . Thanks for entering! It is indeed" what spring brings:" it's the sights, the sounds the breezes, the scents in the air, the coming to life of nature after a long winter's nap. Your poem describes the very essence of spring in a smooth and rhythmic way, that paints clear pictures of what is happening for the reader to easily interpret the images in her mind. Observation "Too To keep it free of weed", I love the fact that there was humor woven into the lines of your poem. "Now what will nature bring? This may be what you will say, Why did I plant the thing?" Great way to end the poem, leaving the reader with a huge grin on her face, because as a lover of gardens, I so know what you mean! Well done! Until next time--write on! Regards, WebWitch My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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