Hello, Prosperous Snow celebrating , and good morning

Your poem came up in the random Read & Review. It was a relatable and entertaining poem needing little to no suggestions so I rated it with four stars. Here are my personal rating policies for your reference: "Bobbi's Rating and/or Reviewing Policy" . If you have any questions, feel free to email me.

The typos and grammar issues I caught were as follows:

I didn't see any obvious errors or typos. Good job!

A few things I noticed as a reader:

I have to admit that I don't review poetry very often. I know little to nothing about things like different forms so I can only comment on things like word choices, how it flowed when I read it aloud and how the poem affected me.

Looking at the subject matter, I feel like this poem was written about me. If I had a dollar for every time I asked myself 'if I were (inanimate object), where would I be?' my husband and I could retire. I sometimes wish I could call my keys or wallet the way that I call my phone when it goes AWOL; at one point I tried using a paging system that I bought on Amazon. It worked well, until the battery went nutso and started beeping all over the place.

I noticed that the stanza form changed here and there as I read it. I don't know if this is following a form I'm unfamiliar with, and it read a little unexpected to me. I read it aloud and it seemed to flow pretty good. All and all, though, it was an amusing and excellent item.

Thank you for allowing me to review your piece. I'm just another reader and writer so use or discard any of my suggestions at your personal discretion. If you make changes and would like me to reassess your piece, feel free to e-mail me.

Keep writing and have a nice day!

--Brandi