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Review of The Cough  
Review by ♥Hooves♥
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am the judge in today's "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" ! Thank you for entering! Also, you are new so I am mooing about that, too! Good job with entering The Writer's Cramp!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think sometimes that which starts off as a cough can mushroom into something bigger. But some people cough all the time and nothing happens. I guess with the prompt you are saying when you find out you only have an hour to live, you are obsessing on a cough. If this is the only symptom you have, I can see why you would focus on it as the culprit.

The description of the people's dark eyes and skin sounded a little off putting to me, but whatever you picture in your final hour is your picture not mine of who is coming to do you in.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* I think it is irony to write about the end coming, when the end is coming. So, you wind it up being focused on that and not other things. So besides being the end, it uses up more of your life thinking about the end. Interesting concept.

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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