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Review #4213916
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 Christelica  [E]
"An expression of love for my two daughters.. miles apart its how I see them in my mind.."
by Drew
Review of Christelica  
Review by eyestar~*
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Balloonp* Welcome to WDC Drew! I am happy to do a review of your very first item! Congrats on posting, Author! *Delight*


I was drawn to the unique title and curious to read it. Your tag line tells a story in itself.

This is truly inspired and the definitions for the term really fit the theme of describing your daughters. Wow! The last one is the best!*Heart*

It is an original piece that looks like a dictionary page used to describe your daughters with 5 different essences. Well thought out ideas! *Thumbsup* It is interesting how you change from "something" to "an object" in your second to last definition. I wondered what "darkly exotic" would look like. *Wink*

I noticed a couple of typos: "thats" needs to be "that's" for "that is" and "fathers" needs to show possession as in "father's". *Wink*

I really enjoyed reading this vision and I like the sound of the word itself. Thanks for sharing your gift. *Starstruck*

Light on the path as you write on!
eyestar

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