Christelica [E] "An expression of love for my two daughters.. miles apart its how I see them in my mind.." |
Welcome to WDC Drew! I am happy to do a review of your very first item! Congrats on posting, Author! I was drawn to the unique title and curious to read it. Your tag line tells a story in itself. This is truly inspired and the definitions for the term really fit the theme of describing your daughters. Wow! The last one is the best! It is an original piece that looks like a dictionary page used to describe your daughters with 5 different essences. Well thought out ideas! It is interesting how you change from "something" to "an object" in your second to last definition. I wondered what "darkly exotic" would look like. I noticed a couple of typos: "thats" needs to be "that's" for "that is" and "fathers" needs to show possession as in "father's". I really enjoyed reading this vision and I like the sound of the word itself. Thanks for sharing your gift. Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable ** "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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