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 |  | How Can I Warm You? (Ode for Lynda 📃)  [E] Remembering Lynda Miller, a spirited Friend of Writing.Com and writers like me.  |
| (5.0)  Hi BkCompton! I am sorry too for Lynda's passing and so appreciate your ability to share so intensely in this poem!  I could feel the loss and even underlying anger that goes with grief as I read your vibrant expression. The symbolism is brilliant and the emotional intensity potent. Your words appeal to the physical senses and create a moving scene in a metaphor that hits home.  The repeating line of "How can I warm you..?" is touching as a plea and an echo of how lost one is in giving and perhaps receiving comfort. The mix of short lines with longer ones and punctuation added to the atmosphere and tone.  I sense how much Lynda meant to you in this vulnerable tribute to her generous and loving soul. It will touch many who knew her.  Thanks for honouring us with your vision.   Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 04/29/2016 @ 11:43am EDT