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Hi cara27

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It's been a pleasure to review your "Invalid Item"  on behalf of the Simply Positive Group. Please be reminded that my review is based on one person's opinion and you have all rights to choose if you like it or not...

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I really liked the idea of this short draft/story, I don't know what is your intention with it. I don't know what to say about your writing style, because there's no a lot of it, but if I consider the whole writing I can tell you would do great job for a start if you're planning to expand it into something longer. It reminds me a little bit of the idea that horror director Dario Argento used in his own movie. He was always annoyed that moviegoers would look away during the especially scary scenes of his films. He would often joke about putting pins under their eyes so they couldn't blink and that's how he came up with the story for his film 'Opera' *Smile*.

I'm really intrigued by your story as well and I think you should work on this in the future. That's my only suggestion for now since there's no too much of information about anything else except the main idea. I felt as if I'm in the movie theater and the movie just started. Thank you for sharing and welcome to WdC once again. All smiles..*Smile*.

~Minja~
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