Review number #2 of week 4/28-5/4

HiRhyssa,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Insomnia

First Impression: You captured exactly how it feels battling insomnia in this poem.

What I liked: I love the stanza beginning with dancing the rituals, we are creatures of habit.

What needs your attention: Nothing, you captured the prompt beautifully.

Favorite Parts: The kaleidoscope inside the eyelids, oh I definitely can relate.

Overall Impression: Another great piece, you set a very high bar in this competition.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .