Review number #4 of week 4/28-5/4

Hi Lost Wordsmith

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Words in Bloom

First Impression: Wow, the imagery created such despair, I felt consumed initially with the darkness.


What I liked: Looking out the window longing for the feeling of youth. Amen, all of us crave that elusive feeling more than we admit.

What needs your attention: nothing, you fulfilled the prompt and told a very thought provoking story with out feeling forced.

Favorite Parts: The cycle does seem to spiral quicker the older we get, or maybe we are more aware of our immortality. I wish we didn't have jaded eyes.

Overall Impression: A powerful poem that hits home with this reader. Awesome job, this is my favorite of today's entries.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .