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The Picture   [18+]
Reading a bedtime story has never been scarier
by Author Ed Anderson
Review of The Picture  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

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What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Wow, you certainly build up the suspense very well for the reader. I read it a second time and then caught the fact of Carrie's private conversation with the family patriarch about the reading choice. That was an interesting hint right from the beginning of something that was going on that shouldn't have been.

I won't give away the details of the plot in the review, but this story was action packed all the way through.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* I won't reveal the ending, but it was a surprise. All the characters in the story are up to something surprising and there are plenty of twists and turns that make the 1st person narrator almost a sympathetic character. Even the children seem to be part of the plotting.

Very clever entry!


HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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