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Polaroid of the Past  [ASR]
Cramp Co-Winner: While babysitting, Barbara makes an unsettling discovery
by Than Pence
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" . Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think you did a fine job with the prompt. Your story gave me chills when she slowly turned to see what she saw. I do not like to give away plots in reviews if I can help it.

Jimmy seemed like a loveable character and all the dialogue between him and Barbara seemed very realistic and like what you might hear between a babysitter and her young charge.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* I liked the humor when Jimmy asked Barbara if she was fancy because she called the dog a mutt! That was a cute and endearing touch! You took a monkey toy and made it come alive! Very nice twist there!

The family secrets sure do lead to mysterious musings don't they!

Nice work for The Cramp!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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