Review number # 6 4/28-5/4 of week

Hi Timtu

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Hanging by a Thread

First Impression: Wow, so much to take in and process so I read it three times. I am glad I did.

What I liked: The story of Dionysius opening the piece planting a seed of inspiration as your work evolved into a thought provoking entry,

What needs your attention: Nothing, I did not note any grammar or punctuation errors to distract me as I read. It flowed smoothly and was very informative to this reader.

Favorite Parts: The explanation following Dionysius's legend how we are controlled by our usage of valuable resources without thinking about the risks involved. The cycle you described so vividly could easily happen while we are so wrapped up in our personal enjoyment. The imagined blade suspended over my head certainly encouraged thought. Maybe we should install one over every leader in the world's desk so they actually take their leadership seriously.

Overall Impression: This was very written, the topic inspired thinking outside the box which is important to our survival. Thank you for encouraging me to think as well about how I use the resources available around me.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure! Good luck with the Quills.
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .