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 A Holy Man Pushing Redemption  [E]
Another one of those poems that is not really about what it seems. A man pushes religion.
by Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I saw your item listed in the poetry section of the Blown Away contest and came to read. Congrats on being nominated for the April contest!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Someone comes knocking on the door with promises of faith. It is like Jehovah's Witnesses but maybe more insistent than they are. It is a human who claims to have the answer, which is bogus to me, too. We all have that answer inside of us if we care to find it.

I noticed one small typo in this part:

"In this tedious world
My faith
Of lack thereof
Is a solid reality"

The word, "Of" should be "Or" I believe. *Checkr*


What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* This is the part that got me, when I knew he was arrogant there at the door:

"Almost like silver dollars
I could tell he was sure
Confidence again beamed
Right across his face"

Thinking one has all the answers with regard to faith is, of course, assuming too much.

My aunt always said she didn't need a middle man/fundraiser between her and God. I think this fine poem sort of proves that point.

Well done!


HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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