Review number # 11 of week 4/28-5/4

Hi Kylie,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Sexual Abuse

First Impression: I can't thank you enough for putting this information together and for sharing it publicly.

What I liked: That each organization had a brief explanation and what they offered for the different types of abuse.

What needs your attention: Nothing, the information is important and it is provided in a very direct manner for the reader. I did not note punctuation or grammar errors.

Favorite Parts: That you offered to add to your list if people wanted to expand on what was offered, that was very kind of you. I can't say it enough how silence enables and you are definitely not hiding in shame. You are a survivor like me and want to make a difference for others by writing about difficult times. I am very proud of you Kylie,

Overall Impression: Information like this is important and providing it in an area where people can find it without it being so blatantly obvious that it might cause them harm is very important. Thank you!

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .