"SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" 

Hello there, Oldwarrior
This is a Simply Positive Review!

Wow, talk about being placed on the edge of my seat! I could feel my heart rate rising in fear for those kids. Good way to build up the suspense and keep the reader wondering what it could be that was so monstrous out there, as to cause such immense "foot prints."

Observations

“Reckone better saddle up,” [reckon]

Retrieving their clothing, they turned to head back to the 4-wheeers. [wheelers]

the sun slowly begin began to sink behind the slight rise to their left.

After several hours of steady walking in the dark, they realized they had wondered wandered off the trail.

Fine thriller with a moral to it about mischievous actions, and their consequences.

Enjoyed the ending!

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .