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At the Root  [E]
exercise based in metaphor from Robert McDowell's writing workshop 5/1/2016
by Walkinbird 3 Jan 1892
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there Walkinbird 3 Jan 1892
This is a Simply Positive Review! *Books1*

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*Trident* Ragnarök is a series of future events, including a great battle foretold to ultimately result in the death of a number of major figures (including the gods Odin, Thor, Týr, Freyr, Heimdallr, and Loki), the occurrence of various natural disasters, and the subsequent submersion of the world in water. Afterward, the world will resurface anew and fertile, the surviving and returning gods will meet, and the world will be repopulated by two human survivors. Wikipedia

*Vignette2* Your prose has a magnetic pull to it, as it made this reader get lost in thought over this Nordic Mythology. I, as you noticed, needed to look up the meaning of "Ragnarok." Quite interesting, and I can see how it became very good material to grab the muse's attention.

*ButterflyO* Your prose explains that the ancestors' souls are laying asleep, in sort of a state of suspended animation. They must await the right time, after proper seasoning by the years, and mother nature doing her finishing touches, until the chosen couple are freed by the gods and allowed to begin to populate mankind, once again.

*Wink* This was my interpretation of your prose, but I have an extremely over active imagination. *Wink*

*ButtonB* It was a short prose, packing huge imagery. I saw no places that needed editing. It is meant to be clear, concise and filled with impact, and that's what it is.

Well done! *MountainsG*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
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