Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 05-04-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

It sounds kinda like a soldier hunkered down and realizing how fleeting life really was.
The emotion is certainly strong within this piece.
The reader feels it rising and falling as the moment dictates.
the form and structure are standard fare.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is rapid.
The grammatical aspects of your piece are remarkable. Nary a jot nor tittle were found to be awry.
No suggestions for improvement are needed. Your piece stands alone and is worthy of recognition.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON by reviewing for her group
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