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Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 05-04-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Nice response to a prompt. You lay out the different aspects and close with the "divine love" that is the title of your piece.
The form and structure are rock solid.
The flow is smooth and enhanced by the absence of grammatical snafus.
The pace is slow as the reader contemplates the various positions you do present to the readers eyes.
There is good imagery and it seems to me to be slightly lacking in the emotional end. Just my opinion and up to you to consider.
Overall the reader is caught up in the piece from beginning to end and that's the truth.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON by reviewing for her group
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