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 Of Lilacs and Boundaries  [E]
Prompt/sample for May 2nd
by fyn
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 05-04-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Wowsa! I wanna see the lilacs now!
You know what would be a great thing is an image of what you so wonderfully describe at the bottom of the piece.
You take the reader on a sensory journey that is full of so many emotions. Imagery that pops and creates an amazing scene in the mind of the reader.
Form and structure are superb.
Flow is smooth and enhanced by your grammatically flawless acumen.
Pace is slow and sensory intoxicating.
Man I'm glad it's may. Maybe I can find a lilac and drink in it's wonder.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON by reviewing for her group
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