Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 05-04-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Your emotion is good here.
It's real and palpable.
Imagery is visible and the reader can see the blown engine to the nth degree.
The form and structure are finely constructed.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is not a race.
The grammatical acumen you possess is visible in this piece.
No recommendations for changes can be made at this time.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON by reviewing for her group
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