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  What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?  I was looking at the Action/Adventure Quill nominations and thought I would read and send a review. Congratulations on your 2015 Quill nomination!    What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?   This is an action packed adventure where fantasy bleeds into reality for a young man who doesn't have a clear mission in life. He finds his ultimate mission through a video game when he loses touch with what is real.I thought the dialogue was excellent between Rick and Larry. Rick's disdain for his father sounds typical for a young college age guy without any direction. What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?  I like the rapid fire movement of the action in your story. It sort of leaves the reader breathless in trying to picture what's going on and question what is real and what isn't.I like how you make it all clear at the end. Great writing - best wishes in the Quill competition! HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps  PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I travel to many galaxies and pick my reading carefully, just as I pick my hay carefully.  END OF PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such"
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