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A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port? I am today's judge in "The Writer's Cramp" . Thank you for entering! What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item? This is a story about a young man who is a keeper of a garden in memory of his beloved mother. I think you did a good job on using the prompt words in a story that is original and endearing. What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item? I liked the relationship you show between the two brothers and how that even though Damien does not care for excessive heat, he keeps his word to his mother in taking care of the garden. You can tell that the effort brings the two brothers closer together in a mutual appreciation of their mother and of the natural beauty that surrounds them. Nice work with the prompts! I enjoyed reading this! HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I travel to many galaxies and pick my reading carefully, just as I pick my hay carefully. END OF PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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