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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am the judge today in "The Writer's Cramp. Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Your first person, action packed adventure is an original and clever use of the prompt words. The Nebulon Starfleet has sent an undercover agent on a mission.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* I really had to chuckle at the President equating his own fate and his world with that of the whole world. I think the ego is usually there (regardless of who is President) to do just that.

The fork as a weapon cracked me up, but it seemed like a good idea. I thought there was definitely a comedic thing going on here so I would put it in that genre, too, that is my only suggestion to you. Of course I may be misreading it but I thoroughly enjoyed riding along on the adventure!

I enjoyed it immensely and thought that you hit a home run with creativity here!

Very original and entertaining! Bravo!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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