Review number # 4 of week May 5-11th

Hi Timtu, Here I am, as I previously mentioned I had to continue reading your discussion.

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Some Final Words on E.T. Brains Part 2

First Impression: The saga continued and was just as engaging to read as the first. Some authors start off like a ball on fire and then peter out but you did not.

What I liked: That the author noted he was not insisting one view was preferable over another. It was his intent to raise points for discussion. I was not familiar with the Drake Equation. I found it fascinating! Thank you!

What needs your attention: Nothing. You are an excellent writer ! No grammar or punctuations errors noted.

Favorite Parts: I chuckled when the author invited the reader to visit Roswell. Dr. Spock is a great character choice to conclude your discussion. "It does not seem logical."

Overall Impression: The discussion was engaging to read and well thought out with interesting points for the reader to consider and to make connections with like The Day the Earth Stood Still. I am inclined to agree we are more dangerous.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .