This cool item popped up on random reads!

The title is evocative and made me curious as to the ways faces could melt, of be seen to melt. Cool!

You have a skill for writing in this free style way, which is pleasant to read in a coherent manner.
I enjoyed the progression of the poets revealing his vision as he walks along, starting quite mundane and then showing how bizzare his observations can be. Detailed descriptions in a matter of fact tone with bits of wonderment as he wonders at the madness. The query at the end keeps the whole thing a mystery to be solved.
It reminds me of seeing the dead, or souls doomed to walk the earth. Some seers see such echos. These seem creepy though, like zombies?

Many of the lines roll with easy off the tongue as word choices flow well together in interesting sound scapes. No specific rhyme but sounds recur and echo each other as I move through the piece.

Very creative and imaginative piece of writing! I had fun pondering your vision!

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