I've never reviewed an 'etheree' type of poem. I have no idea what the style is. That makes it hard to review. I looked in a book, couldn't find it there either.

I would have ended the lines differently, such as where the commas are, but I'm sure you had a reason for doing it that way.

It sounds like a poem of some dead spirits talking to those left behind. I've never heard of it being dark. Usually it's 'go toward the light' or meeting loved ones to guide the way. This is so sad in that it's so dark. Being more than one spirit, makes it even sadder.

I didn't get the last line, but the rest was very clear. I'm so sorry if this is based in truth.
Thanks for sharing.
love, LinnAnn