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*Balloonp* Hiya Crow! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! *Delight*


This stunning heartfelt article popped up on random reads! Wow! This is a well written commentary on the state of things in our world. Your experience dealing with alchoholism, anger and violence, as a pastor certainly must have given you pause to reflect and wonder as you show here. The motivation and why of people's actions and choices is elusive. I like what you say about how some from same family have a fulfilling life and others..not so much. I have that experience in my family and my mom's family as well when it comes to alcoholic influences. It is, as you say quite interesting to ponder.

Your piece is well organized and coherent to read and your examples are all too commonly seen in the world today. Your concept about "live streaming violence" is brilliant and a sad fact as well. Your awareness of anger that can lead to violence is clear as well. And what about the "Lies" that go on at all levels? I have read that if someone lies, it brings up our anger---though we may not even know there is a lie--- the anger is letting us know what we do not want to know.

Your personal point of view is clear and sincere with an intent to illustrate and invite people to see what is going on and wake up to perhaps choose differently. The idea of "think for self" is certainly good advice. I like how there is no judgemental tone in your reflection and the atmosphere of wondering why as you make your points is evident.

The last line is evocative and wow! What a punch! *Smile* Brilliant!

Thanks for sharing your vision so profoundly and with a bit or prophetic insight! *Starstruck* For those who have ears, hear.
You express what many of us are aware of and yet we cannot Make people choose or change, just invite. *Heart*

Light on the path as you write on!
eyestar

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