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*Balloonp* Hiya Lou! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! *Delight*


*Flowerw*Oh my gosh! What an absolutely riveting vision you have created! I fell right into the magic of the moment vividly present with the Lilly. The word weave was alluring and coherent to read aloud with its tone of sheer love and appreciation for this marvel of nature. *Heart*

The detail is amazing as if you zoomed right in with a lens and slowed time. The chosen words created a pleasing sound effect with alliterative and repeated letter sounds! I liked ideas like "succulent with invitation", "bewitching", "alabastar pearls" etc.

The metaphor of the mother is brilliant. The concept of your connection to the lilly and the experience of being "spent" for a purpose is interesting.

You really captured the elegance of this flower with matching eloquence. *Starstruck* Thanks for the stunning vision.

Light on the path as you write on!
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