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Greetings Velva !



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am today's judge in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" . Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think your poem is very engaging as you take the reader back in time to childhood imaginings and pranks centered around ghostly apparitions.

I guess when we are kids we have some more time for thinking about ghosts.

Your poem flows well and tells a story of a time long ago.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* I particularly like this part:

"We knew there wasn't such a thing
as spooks, ghouls or even the undead.
It was such fun to scare each other
as no one believed what people had said."

There is a quandry of how does it scare if we don't believe. I think we all have this little bit of doubt that you capture so well.

Nice work with the prompt!


HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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