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 Lost on the wind  [E]
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by spidey
Review of Lost on the wind  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* You sent me a very nice review, so here I am to read and review in your port. I looked in the folder called "Lies" to find this poem.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think you describe an idyllic time in one's life. The funny thing about times like these is that I never realized it at the time, that is, that I should have stopped and thought about it. It is more about just enjoying it at the time.

Then, when I think about it, I wish I could go back and not focus on the wrong things. When I've been in awesome settings, I invariably zeroed in on something trivial, not the surroundings.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* This was my favorite part:

"I've buried my delighted toes
in caressing sands of misplaced time."

This made me close my eyes and picture a beach many moons ago. Lovely language with every word carefully chosen. Oh, to be lost on that wind and those gentle breezes one more time. I hope with hindsight now, I would get it, but would I really? Fun to dream about it, that's for sure!

Wonderful poetry!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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